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Old 11-14-2008, 08:34 PM #1
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Heart it will be ok

you stand there
trying to be strong
pretending everything will be ok

i can see your shattered heart on the floor
i can see behind those eyes
i know its killing you inside

its ok brother
you can cry
ill be the strong one this time

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Old 11-15-2008, 09:18 AM #2
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Those thought sound so familiar. Thank you for sharing.
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welcome. i was feeling stressed and thought i should write something on how i felt.
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I like it a lot.

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thank you very much. =) its nice to know
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hope you'll write more, downfall...

you've wrote something that a lot of us can relate, for sure..

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