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Old 03-11-2009, 12:23 AM #1
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Heart So Positive

So Positive

You’re so positive,
I don’t know how you could be,
What you’re going through,
Would be a struggle for me.

You’re so positive,
I can’t believe you look strong,
I think you are brave,
When everything has gone wrong.

You’re so positive,
I can hear it in your voice,
Always so upbeat,
You try to make the right choice.

You’re so positive,
I can see it every day,
Always with a smile,
And somehow you find a way…

{©2009 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
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thank you for this Jaime...

it brought a smile to my face cause it reminds me of my wonderful wife....

I love positive people and their influences with a few sprinkles of humanity and humility thrown in...my wife is just like that...she raises me up...

thank you for writing what I couldn't write...
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Nice! Really nice! I like the poem! Great and well-expressed ideas!

My muse has been quiet for so long that I don't know if I will ever write a poem again. So, thanks for sharing yours with us.
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Very nice poem.

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