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Old 04-17-2009, 12:59 PM #1
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"free from time"

here i go fast and free
windows down tunes cranked no disease
magical songs of yesterday those without a care
flying down the road wind rushing through my hair
this escape comes with a simple flick of a switch
all my troubles and worries i was able to ditch
green eyed lady, cranked so loud
then the next song makes me want to sing out loud
music is my escape and yes the breeze feels good
a simple vacation from MS, a moment of feeling like i should
no one can stop me or take this moment away
its a freedom from my worries what else can I say
we all can dig back to a time long gone
to that one tune, that magical song
so as i cruise through the country and towns
this magical smile replaces my MS frown
no one can stop me for the moment i am free
windows down tunes cranked and no stupid disease
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(((hugs)))...those moments are magical. I loved the way you described it....
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I love this poem. Thank you.

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...Expressed perfectly!
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