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Old 08-04-2009, 07:54 PM #1
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Default One Day

One Day

One day I’m good,
The next I feel bad,
One day I’m smiling,
The next feeling really sad.
One day I’m well,
The next I’m in pain,
One day I’m standing,
The next day I’m down again.
One day I’m fine,
The next day I’m not,
One day I have strength,
The next it takes all I’ve got…

{©2009 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
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One Day

One day I’m good,
The next I feel bad,
One day I’m smiling,
The next feeling really sad.
One day I’m well,
The next I’m in pain,
One day I’m standing,
The next day I’m down again.
One day I’m fine,
The next day I’m not,
One day I have strength,
The next it takes all I’ve got…

{©2009 Jan B.}

~Jaime~
This say's it all!!! I really like it. Thanks for sharing-- when I read this it made me know that I was not alone for sure---Thanks Hutch
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jaime, you should have a poetry book out...
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That's very good.
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