Does this not sound more accurate
The purpose of our Community is simple -- it's devoted to support for the neurological and mental health of all of our membes as well as any related health issues. In that veinof support you should endeavor to be civil and treat others as you expect to be treated
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The purpose of our Community is simple -- it's devoted to support for neurological health, mental health and related health issues. In that vein, you should be civil and treat others as you expect to be treated
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the followig statement needs to be elaborated upon to include your current changes as to this forum being included
such as
Soliciting others to join comparable health communities.
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Soliciting others to join another online mental health community
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Then again that is such an overbearing statement of almost ownership of an individual that maybe should be eliminated