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Originally Posted by PoetryLover
tears as many as the stars in universe
never ending river of salty water pouring down
say words carrying emotions- see my wet eyes
no lock gate, strong enough to hold back this force
sensations playing a vivid game- in the chambers of my heart
sadness rolling in like the mighty tide
covering my cheeks- leaving my chin- falling down on dust
my chest huge in breathing pain- eating up my air
numb features of a soul astray
cry a little while longer
then- let it pass my way
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A very nice poem indeed. I can feel the emotion. Seems so down and hurting. I also can write poems especially when I am going through something in my life. It is a way to release all the hurt and sure it does work for me. I hope to read more of your work. Good Luck.