red90,

Welcome to NeuroTalk.

TMI, dude

Rather than just break it up. How about the shortened version just about your injury, symptoms, and struggles ?

Many of us struggle with memory issues. I, for one, do not have the capacity to sort through details that do not matter. I just end up overloaded and lost.

By the way, I guarantee you this was not your first concussion. It was just the first concussion that caused symptoms that lasted and effected your life.

You hit your head playing football. What happened next ?

I skipped to your last paragraph. You just wrote War and Peace. Why are you worried about becoming a writer ?