aj,
As another detail person, I wonder if there shouldn't be a comma in the "Creed" section right after "chance" [and another after "information" (optional)].
Quote:
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When you accept there is the chance no matter how small, that you are not doomed to a life borne out of your own nightmares, then you start to gather information and you start concentrating on what you can do, rather than on what you can’t.
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And you have done a terrific job of pulling the thing together. I can put my heart and mind behind it.
J.