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Old 08-27-2008, 03:02 PM
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Hey- Just a quick note. Instead of "I have read . . ." I would put "Current research suggests that Hyperbaric Oxygen Treatment is promising for patients suffering from RSD." It's a little bit more authoritative and direct. This way it's not her opinion but the opinion of current research, which is a lot more powerful.

Hope this helps.
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