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Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 102
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Member
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 102
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Hey- Just a quick note. Instead of "I have read . . ." I would put "Current research suggests that Hyperbaric Oxygen Treatment is promising for patients suffering from RSD." It's a little bit more authoritative and direct. This way it's not her opinion but the opinion of current research, which is a lot more powerful.
Hope this helps.
Lynn
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