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Old 11-25-2008, 08:08 PM
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Alffe Mom asked if I would post this up here instead of the wonder thread and I am changing the line "poetry slam" to - life.

“Chain saw” -BMW '08-
The thought caught me
Stung me boring
Tearing like a chain saw
Bleeding a purpose
Spilling drops of stubborn persistence
I gather my strength
And proceeded
Like a chain saw
Buzzing ,smoking
Cutting threw
Life Like
A chain saw.
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