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Grand Magnate
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: east coast florida
Posts: 3,456
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Grand Magnate
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: east coast florida
Posts: 3,456
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some of my work
Twilight ---Tina- '06
Rolling black
Pitch darkness
Blind isolation, hovering
Covering smothering
Stumbled down
Into the center
Spills reflection
Blue tone hues
Overtaking black
Final light on distant
Horizons, A focal point
To REACH within oneself
In your darkest hours.
GREAT wonder
The words I wrote was a shame to share,
With 98 reads of just peek and stare
No words at all of “ I can relate”
Or” that poem it wasn’t so great”,
No words of any kind given back,
After sharing mine ,makes the lights turn black.
what is the point of sharing i wonder
it was not great great great
i got no replies, no friends that could relate
just showed what i already known
i am the stinky chesse that stands alone
nothing to do but wash away
my poems with all the words i had to say
Last edited by Burntmarshmallow; 12-27-2006 at 08:59 AM.
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