Hey everyone,
Just thought I would share a quick poem I just wrote and thought I would see if anyone could give me any feed back on what they think. Thank you.


DIFFERENT WORLDS

PAIN,
You don’t know the half of it,
You think it feels like your kind of pain,
You are WRONG,
Our pain is so much worse than your pain,
When you get hit or touched in your rsd areas
It hurts more than you will ever know,
It feels worse than being burnt by fire,
You think you know how we feel,
You are way wrong,
You will NEVER know the pain we walk through everyday,
Everyday seems to be more of a challenge,
The challenges we face are nothing like your challenges,
We have to fight for EVERYTHING we do and say,
You do not,
Our world is so much different than yours,
Your world seems to be so easy compared to ours,
You don’t live with pain 24/7 like we do,
You may have pain,
But it is nothing like ours,
I wish you could endure what we do for just one day,
Then maybe you would understand a little better,
Pain is not a GAME,
It is one of the most real things out there,
It is one of the BIGGEST monsters out there to us,
So if you really think you know what we are going through,
Then come live our life for one day,
You won’t know how to react,
As we are still trying solve puzzles everyday and not always exceeding.

Written By Tracy Tracy



Thank you for taking the time to read this. Like I said I would just like to get some feedback if i could.

Sincerely,
screwballpookie