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Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 10,329
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Legendary
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 10,329
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speaking of breath
i wrote this in 1989 before being thrown out of university. i wrote a lot back then. i was going through the motions then too, like i am now. not enough motions: not going to class... not taking exams...
it is called, none, all lower case, and the lines also are expressly all lower case. i myself was in lower case:
stark and bare
no feeling left
to feel
the evening air
cold and still
no movement left
to move
the broken will
all and one
no breath to take
no breath
at all
none
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