I think your post was perfect... Actually... I thought it was very good and thorough and gave great directions and was all inclusive by listing the brand of soy sauce AND where to get it!
I just wanted to make extra note for newbies who can be trying to speed read through ALL the information they're trying to absorb.
Sorry about that... I didn't mean to imply that your post wasn't fine exactly as it was... I'm just feeling too rushed these days... apologies!!!