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Old 04-30-2007, 10:16 PM #1
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Default No sleep, wrote this

I'm not through with this poem.


I wish I could wipe away your fear.
Make you forget your troubles by holding you near.

I wish I knew what's in your heart.
For now I'll await in the shadows of the dark.
I truely hope for some kind of spark.
Between the loniliness of two broken hearts.

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Old 04-30-2007, 10:38 PM #2
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((((((Bee)))))),

I *KNEW* you had a kind and caring heart

I think you should get a real nice blank book and write down the feelings that this man is generating in you.

It's maybe too soon to overwhelm the guy with all your feelings. But, I'm a BIG BELIEVER in Destiny and The Universe guiding us. You're being guided toward this man for a reason. I BELIEVE IT.

Someday -- in the not too distant future -- you'll be able to give your wonderful book of poetry to him when you two become closer. In the meantime, maybe you could also purchase some pretty little greetings cards (the inspirational kind) and give him just a little 'hint' of the specialness inside you and inside your poetry.

BIG HUGS (and love).

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I love that poem. You show a lot of emotions and you seem so kind. I hope you have a great day and that you get some sleep soon! *hugs*
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That's a beautiful poem, I really like it. You have talent in writing, keep it going.

Thanks for sharing......


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