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Old 07-05-2007, 02:05 PM #1
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Hi all. I'm feeling ok. Better than I have been in the past few weeks. I just wanted to share this. I wrote it last month. It is basically a bunch of Haiku all strung together.

Meeting With The Dawn

mornings come and go
some seem better than others
one must move forward

vexing me harshly
must I yield to it’s urging?
giving up the night

my youth found the light
welcoming it—arms open
saved from the unknown

a life poorly spent
now the light brings back those things
disappointing me

I surely must rise
again conquering darkness
a new day to change

its not just me now
linked and sworn to many more
depending on me

tangled web woven
it now must be unraveled
this is my life’s course

meeting with the dawn
feeling cross and crestfallen
I have no courage

Racing thoughts torture
there is no more choice for sleep
rise, you unwilling
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Old 07-05-2007, 08:19 PM #2
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Thank you for sharing with us. My hugs and comfort,
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Sending hugs and a breathe of fresh air and better days to come.

Thanks for sharing.

Lots of hugs, Nikko
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What a lovely poem of self expression.

Sometimes it helps to put the emotion on paper. I always felt like it was letting the demons out.
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