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Old 09-08-2007, 04:34 PM #1
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Things are ok. Dealing with a little bit of frustration over certain things lately, but overall things are ok. Hope you are all well, Charley

total frustration
want to go on a rampage
or melt into tears

one struggling hard
trying to do the right thing
some golden standard

a moving target
is here is gone is out of sight
a sickening doubt

a thick fog obscures
all that’s just and rational
struggling with self

and when the mist clears
the judges on the sidelines
reveal a low score

all the hurdles cleared
some fool trips you with his foot
falling your heart breaks

the only answer
is one you know very well
get up and move on
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Old 09-09-2007, 01:07 PM #2
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Charley,

You do sound like there is anquish going on. I hope things will get better for you.

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Old 09-09-2007, 07:51 PM #3
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Hi tritone...
I liked your poem....
((((HUGS))))
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Hi,
Good poem - you put all your feelings into it. It does sound like you are hurting.

Hope things get better.

Maybe bring that poem to your p-doc and/or therapist.

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