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12-02-2009, 04:44 AM | #1 | ||
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Literal Parkinson’s disease Translation
I’m screaming but there is no sound. My feet have been told to move Messages get twisted, not passed down Stiff muscles don’t know what to do. Like powerlessness of beast in cage A tangled up Pinocchio Jeered hunchback of Notre Dame Wearing “the iron mask’s” facial tomb The “I’m ok, you’re ok” chemical gone So many reasons to give up Vulnerable to end up - a pawn With overwhelmed family, lost love These losses real & bravely faced our numbers increase, how many? not sure Our time left unknown, Together we MUST find a cure! Last edited by jinglelady4; 12-02-2009 at 04:21 PM. Reason: to increase value & understanding of poem |
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12-03-2009, 06:28 PM | #2 | ||
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see last verse revised |
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Burntmarshmallow (12-07-2009) |
12-06-2009, 06:30 PM | #3 | |||
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Good expression in the poem. Thank you for sharing.
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Burntmarshmallow (12-07-2009) |
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