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Old 02-19-2007, 10:33 PM #1
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Smile Trust Me

Trust me
I haven't lied to you yet
Trust me
I'm probably the most honest person you've met
Trust me
I know that it's hard
Trust me
I'll not break your hearts
Trust me
I'm not so transparent
Trust me
I mean more than what's said
My heart
Is always speaking with words
Trust me
It's not always heard
Usually
I have to explain--The deep thoughts in my brain
Ask the one
Who's closest to me
What he says--You should believe
Trust me
It's all that I ask
Trust me
I can explain the past
Every word, every phrase that was uttered
Sounded so plain
But it wasn't
It meant something different
Than what was derived
Trust me
There was no spy
Trust me
I have nothing to hide
(for my family)- written, 2/19/07

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Old 02-21-2007, 10:18 PM #2
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I really like that, ColumbianGirl. What a simple message, couched in so many variations of personal feeling.
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It makes me feel good to hear that other people really like my poetry. I've considered writing a tell-all book about my life heretofore, but it just seems like so much work, and a bit daunting. Maybe someday, maybe in the near future. So much I'd like to share with the world.

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