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Old 01-23-2012, 09:54 PM #1
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A Young Life

A young life lost,
And a mother's broken heart,
The consequences,
Of a life that was torn apart.
A young life ended,
By the cold cruel hand of fate,
No one could save her,
They tried but it was all too late.
A young life over,
Before it had a chance to grow,
But she lost direction,
Now the future's something she'll never know.
A young life taken,
From a desperate mothers love,
An impressionable mind,
She tried to reach that glittery star above.
A young life destroyed,
Her hopes were set way too high,
Dreams unattainable,
Nothing went right and she didn't know why.
A young life gone now,
She left believing they didn't care,
So lost and confused,
But in her mothers heart, she'll always be there...

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Thank you so much for this. We lost a granddaughter when she was only 9 weeks, SIDs. I think of her all the time. She was born on Christmas day, at this time she would be 13. Again thank you.

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Thank you for this one Jaime_S. I think many people can relate to your words, including myself. I only hope they were not prompted by the recent loss of some-one dear to you.
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Well, it was 'inspired' by a loss of a young girl I knew of, but didn't know well...she took her own life after being bullied...
But, it's for all those who have lost a loved-one, for whatever reason, way too soon...
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