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01-23-2012, 09:54 PM | #1 | |||
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A Young Life
A young life lost, And a mother's broken heart, The consequences, Of a life that was torn apart. A young life ended, By the cold cruel hand of fate, No one could save her, They tried but it was all too late. A young life over, Before it had a chance to grow, But she lost direction, Now the future's something she'll never know. A young life taken, From a desperate mothers love, An impressionable mind, She tried to reach that glittery star above. A young life destroyed, Her hopes were set way too high, Dreams unattainable, Nothing went right and she didn't know why. A young life gone now, She left believing they didn't care, So lost and confused, But in her mothers heart, she'll always be there... {©2012 Jan Brooks}
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01-24-2012, 01:49 AM | #2 | |||
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Thank you so much for this. We lost a granddaughter when she was only 9 weeks, SIDs. I think of her all the time. She was born on Christmas day, at this time she would be 13. Again thank you.
Darlene
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01-24-2012, 04:51 AM | #3 | |||
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Thank you for this one Jaime_S. I think many people can relate to your words, including myself. I only hope they were not prompted by the recent loss of some-one dear to you.
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01-24-2012, 09:14 PM | #4 | |||
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Well, it was 'inspired' by a loss of a young girl I knew of, but didn't know well...she took her own life after being bullied...
But, it's for all those who have lost a loved-one, for whatever reason, way too soon...
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