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Old 03-21-2007, 08:00 PM #1
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Tongue Certainty...

I can't say
That I know
With any
Certainty
That everything
Is going to be
Just the way
I want it to be
I can't say
With any
Certainty
That you still
Love me
I can't say
With any
Certainty
That the past
Will not bother
Me
I wish
That I had
A wish
To be granted
To me
Because
What I would
Ask for is
Undoubtedly
Right now
Certainty...

(written-3/21/07)
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Old 03-21-2007, 09:48 PM #2
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This one is very good, CG. It really strikes a chord in me. Certainty is the one thing I haven't tasted since a long time ago. Keep up the writing. You know that I really like your poems.
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cg---- you are very talented in putting your feelings into beautiful words...they have real feelings and truths-- peaceful nights to you..linda
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C-girl - I agree with Idealist, this one really strikes a cord with me too.

Keep it up you are great
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Default thanks everyone...

For the replies. Everything you all said was so nice. Thanks, again.

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CGIRL

Love all your writing, but especially this poem-Certainty. What we all want, but few get. You have been blessed to be able to put your thoughts to light in such a way that they have such meaning to others and allows us to see the wonderful person that you are. Blessings, CAROSE
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