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Old 05-21-2007, 05:37 PM #1
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Default Nice Try...

But, no cigar
At least now,
I know, who,
You are
I can't believe
I was wrong
About you
I can't believe
You'd play games
Too
I thought you were
My friend
Well, now then,
It's time for that
To end
Too bad you
Turned out
To be just some creep
Too bad
You took advantage
Of me
When, I was weak
Oh well,
That's okay
I didn't know you
That well, anyway
I suppose
You'll still try
To figure out
Which one
It was
Only he would know
You might as well
Give up...
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Old 05-22-2007, 08:24 AM #2
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That was good,being assertive.You should read my poem "Counterfiet",I think you would really like that one.I think I already posted that one on my poetry thread,check it out!
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Nice one here c-girl. thanks for the up. you are tops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv ya
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hey c-girl please come back
arghh "Mr. guy" step back please and dont step on anyone while you step back..Thankyou
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