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05-01-2007, 01:45 PM | #1 | |||
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Grand Magnate
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Hi all,
I was inspired to write this from knowing my neighbor with cancer. I look out my door and pray. To see my neighbor accross the way. Come hell or high water, I'm gonna visit and not faulter. I don't care what my people say. I just want to live for today. I just want to visit for awhile. And see upon your face that smile. I wish I could wipe away your fear. Make you forget your troubles by holding you near. I wish I knew what's in your heart. For now I'll await in the shadows of the dark. I truely hope for some kind of spark. Between the loniliness of two broken hearts. |
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05-01-2007, 01:58 PM | #2 | |||
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Grand Magnate
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wow great verse Befuddled .
I soak up all the verse people share it is like medicine or food for me. My mom has a year tops left she is old and your poem warmed my heart so thanks for doing that . I am sorry for your neighbor batteling cancer, Many Blessings to you and all those around you. Peace Peace BMW. p.s. the saying 'a smile is a one size fits all gift'... pops into mind and placing a smile on anothers face is a pleasure of a task to do ya know so I hope you visit with your neighbor and see that smile soon. |
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05-01-2007, 03:25 PM | #3 | |||
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Grand Magnate
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I'm glad you liked my poem. I am sorry to hear your mom is ill. there is nothing like a mom. Hugs to you.
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05-01-2007, 03:59 PM | #4 | ||
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((((((Bee)))))),
WOW!! That is so beautiful I love words. It's so amazing that so much feeling and caring and emotion can come from squiggles on a paper. MM is right -- *YOU* are a treasure Marshmallow, I'm sorry about your Mom BIG HUGS Barb |
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05-01-2007, 04:28 PM | #5 | ||
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BF2
That is a wonderful poem! |
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