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Old 05-01-2007, 01:45 PM #1
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Trig Poem for Neighbor

Hi all,

I was inspired to write this from knowing my neighbor with cancer.

I look out my door and pray.
To see my neighbor accross the way.
Come hell or high water,
I'm gonna visit and not faulter.

I don't care what my people say.
I just want to live for today.
I just want to visit for awhile.
And see upon your face that smile.

I wish I could wipe away your fear.
Make you forget your troubles by holding you near.

I wish I knew what's in your heart.
For now I'll await in the shadows of the dark.
I truely hope for some kind of spark.
Between the loniliness of two broken hearts.
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wow great verse Befuddled .
I soak up all the verse people share it is like medicine or food for me. My mom has a year tops left she is old and your poem warmed my heart so thanks for doing that . I am sorry for your neighbor batteling cancer,
Many Blessings to you and all those around you.
Peace Peace
BMW. p.s. the saying 'a smile is a one size fits all gift'... pops into mind and placing a smile on anothers face is a pleasure of a task to do ya know so I hope you visit with your neighbor and see that smile soon.
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I'm glad you liked my poem. I am sorry to hear your mom is ill. there is nothing like a mom. Hugs to you.

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((((((Bee)))))),

WOW!! That is so beautiful I love words. It's so amazing that so much feeling and caring and emotion can come from squiggles on a paper.

MM is right -- *YOU* are a treasure


Marshmallow, I'm sorry about your Mom

BIG HUGS

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BF2

That is a wonderful poem!
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