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Old 05-01-2007, 10:23 AM #1
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Default Methaphor my challenge

Sky Envelope Tina poetry challenge 5-1-07

Invisible conversations written with air,

Sealed inside her private horizon.

When the Sun is strong

middle in the day,

When light’s a pinhead

some trillion years away ,

Replies arrive signed

“ Handle With Care”.

See threw messages transparent to the eye.

Mail is here via ‘ Special delivery”.

A ladybug , a cloud ,

a far off tapping sound,

Answering questions ,

more facts jotted down,

Too much for paper

to keep such affair,

She letters it out,

tucking it into the sky.
----------stealing is bad------------------------------------
Ladybug Mother Tina poetry challenge 5-‘07

Ladybug Mother, folding out wings.
A poke-a-dot drop, her small shell,
Colorful protection, she’ll glide well
Into warm breeze seeing what flight brings.
Down to the ground from flying above
Attention caught fascinated, falling
Mushy kissy two bugs crawling,
Side by side , on top , trapped in love.
Ladybug ladybug children galore
Infesting the garden, like a swarm.
Every time the outdoors air is warm.
The children are not little anymore.
Lady’s gracefully become, Great Great Great
Recalling many stories of flights,
Easily filling years worth of nights,
Elder mind reached into its recreate.
Ladybug mother flutter your wings
Kids will help you make one final round ,
Soon snowy silence… and she renown.
Upon warming breeze, her afterlife springs.
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Default Nice work!!

Like them both. Love Sky Envelope. The last line is really cool. Post some more for us to see soon!!

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Both are great.

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