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Old 05-10-2007, 08:46 PM #1
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Default All That it Seems...
Sunkissed skin
Fading into autumn's wind
The promises made
Still fresh-and, obeyed
He has her
In an instant
Undisturbed
She walks,
On the pavement
In happy, amazement
The day before
Wanting, so much more
Instructions, were given
And, followed, with precision
The fragrant rose,
Tickles, her nose
She severs belief
For, how could this be?
Angry, for years?
No, only, unconfirmed fears
What does it mean?
All, that it seems...
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nice expressionaly verse C-girl. keep up the hard/ but very GOOD work.
many blessings for strength courage peace love and sunshine.
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Very nice cg. Was that about a little girl or a big girl??
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Question Mystery anyone?
I'm not explaining this one. Have a guess. It's whatever you want it to be...

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