No One Knows

Jaime_S · 05-13-2007, 11:05 PM

No One Knows

I smile a lot,
And I look so confident,
But no one knows,
That this disguise is heaven sent.
I talk clearly,
And I look in control,
But no one knows,
That deception fills my soul.
I move with ease,
And I look like I'm so sure,
But no one knows,
That fear shakes me to the core.
I act so brave,
And I look like I'm happy,
But no one knows,
How the pain is destroying me.
I fool everyone,
And I try to fool myself too,
But no one knows,
The hell I'm really going through...

{©2006 Jan B.}

~Jaime~

Justice · 05-14-2007, 07:28 AM

I love poetry,and write poetry myself.I really liked how expressive you're poem was. That's what I love so much about writing,is that you can turn an introduction,or anytype of communication into a beautiful piece of art! And it's such a good coping skill to,just to get those frustrations,or just any type of feelings out,and then you can do what you want with what you wrote. But just by reading that,it helps me understand you better,and isn't it much easier to write it,than explain your feelings verbally,I strongly belive that.
I think you'll like the poetry I've posted on my thread,titled A POEM "Free at Last",I've added 2 more poems to it,and one of them talks about,not really knowing someone by looking at them,called "Counterfeit",you ought to check it out,and keep sharing,cause I'll read them!

carose · 05-14-2007, 06:15 PM

this poem. I am not able to express myself as well as you do so I wonder if you mind if I copy it and give it to my attorney so he can understand that just because I look OK doesn't mean I feel OK

Carose

Jaime_S · 12-15-2009, 10:41 PM

One of my old poems...for those who may be struggling a bit at this time.

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