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Old 05-09-2007, 10:41 PM #1
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Default Sometimes...

Sometimes
I think
All of these
Delusions
Are so funny
And, I sit here
Laughing
Because it's so
Rediculous to me
Sometimes
It really breaks my heart
And, I sit here
Crying
All torn apart
I guess those
Are what they're
Referring to
When they talk about
"Mood swings"
It's much easier
When
It's acutally
Laughable
To me
I'm glad
Not to believe them
All of the time
Sometimes
God smiles on me
And, I see things
Normally
And, I'm not
Plagued with
Unreality
If, I can be
Left alone
Long enough
What you'll see
Soon, from me
Is myself
The girl you
Have known
These past 7 years
And, no one will have
Anything more
To fear...
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Old 05-09-2007, 11:09 PM #2
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Really good, CG. This is a very revealing and personal poem. I'm really glad that you got it out of you...
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Old 05-13-2007, 09:42 AM #3
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Cgirl,

It feels so good to get our feelings out on paper. How are you today?

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Old 05-13-2007, 10:26 AM #4
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Default doing good...

Feeling much better, Thanks!

Peace, and, Love
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Hi columbian girl.....Glad to know that you are feeling better...I like what you posted. I do that sometimes but havent for quite a while...maybe soon I will post something. Take Care Dorrie xoxo
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