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Default Final Poem

Poem to neighbor with cancer:

People said to be careful
But I just resented that ear full
I wanted so much for us to have something
But as time passed I knew it could be nothing
You seem so harsh to others you see
That kind of attitude displeases me
I want so badly to be needed
For my wants I have pleaded
My tears flow freely
I'm tired of being lonely
My Lord, what have I done?
No one loses and one one has won.
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