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Old 06-20-2007, 08:05 PM #1
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Default Bitterness...

I have alot of
Bitterness
Deep, inside
Bitterness,
That, I often,
Try, to hide
I'm bitter about
My father,
My mother, too
And, even, some
Bitterness
Directed towards,
You
And, you,
And, so many, more
Bitterness,
That, I don't really
Wish, to explore
I'm seeing,
Quite, clearly,
How, unfair,
People have been,
Really
And, cruel,
And, uncaring,
And, most certainly,
Daring
Daring me,
To, make a mistake,
Daring me,
To, reciprocate
Faulting, me,
Blaming, me,
And, most definitely,
Escaping, me
You can hide,
You can deny,
But, we'll both
Always, know,
Just, what, it was,
That, made me cry....

(writen-7/20/07-For, SO MANY, people)
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Old 06-20-2007, 11:47 PM #2
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