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Old 06-21-2007, 10:39 AM #1
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Default Disappear...

Would you like
For me,
To just, disappear?
Would you like
To never, ever, hear
From me again?
Would you like
For me, to leave,
Without, a word, spoken?
Without, a wayward, good-bye?
Or, a brief, look in your eyes?
Would you like
Me to give back
The people, I took from you,
If, that were something,
I could do?
Would you like
To never, hear my voice?
Or, see, my face?
Would you like
Silence, from me,
In every, way?
I'll give you
Anything, you ask
I'll even stop, asking,
About, the past
I really think
The message, here
Is, that, you would
Like for me
To, disappear...

(This, is really, how, I feel. Not, meant to sound sarcastic, in any way.)
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Old 06-21-2007, 01:03 PM #2
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I would not like for you to just disappear. Because I enjoy reading your poems and no matter where you go there you are!! so you may just as well keep posting here and help get it outside and not kept trapped inside. Carose
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Old 06-21-2007, 01:05 PM #3
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Hey, C-Girl! It's good to see you writing again! I personally have always thought that you wrote what you really felt. I've never doubted that. It's one of the things that makes your poetry so refreshing. I hope everything's good with you, and you're taking care of yourself.

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