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Old 06-29-2007, 05:30 PM #1
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Default Two songs I wrote at work today...

No titles yet, or music either, still, both a work in progress...

Fear, driving psychosis
Feel it lift,
For, a moment
Then, it smothers, again

Feel it coming on again
Coming on
And, it's stronger than
It's ever been

Waves of depression
Phases of pain
Whirlpool of sadness
I'm drowning again
Where does it end?
This suffocating, strangulation,
Of schizophrenic, symptomatic, madness

The fear is blinding
And, I cannot close my eyes
Cannot close them,
For, I am afraid, that, I may die

Feel it coming on again
Coming on
And, it's stronger
Than, it's ever been

I feel my hands
I feel them burning
This self-inflicted, injury
I cannot explain why
It's only me

I look at them
And, I cry
I stare at them
While, the water
Runs, down, my sides

Feel it coming on again
Coming on
And, it's stronger
Than, it's ever been...


Song # 2:

She's the beauty queen
For a moment
She sees their admiration
For a moment

But, beauty is fading
That's the old saying
It comes, and, it goes
As the days unfold

Her eyes were always
Hazel, green
Set your world ablaze
The prettiest,
you've ever seen
Her hair, was long, and, straight
Chestnut, brown
And, soft as rain

But, beauty is fading
that's the old saying
It comes and it goes
As the days unfold

Now, no one looks her way
How foreign, this feels
it just happened one day

But, beauty is fading
That's the old saying
it comes, and, it goes
As the days unfold

Her beauty, has
All but gone away
So have the heads
That used to turn
And, the people,
Who used to say,
How pretty, she was
She, used to hear that, everyday

But, beauty is fading
That's the old saying
it comes, and, it goes
As your days unfold...

I think, I have too many choruses in this last one, will have to tweak that a little!
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