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Old 07-04-2007, 04:15 AM #1
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Heart Your Friend

I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND

When you're feeling low,
And your smile is just pretend,
You feel so lonely,
I will always be your friend.
When you're feeling lost,
And don't know which way to go,
Too many barriers,
I'll be your friend, you know.
When you're feeling empty,
And there's a deep hole in your heart,
Can't find fulfillment,
I'll be your friend, from the start.
When you're feeling weak,
And so worthless is how you feel,
Those negative thoughts,
I'll be your friend, who is always real.
When you're feeling helpless,
And you feel they don't really care,
Things seem hopeless,
I'll be your friend, who is always there...

{ ©2005 Jan B.}

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Old 07-05-2007, 01:14 AM #2
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Jaime,

Thank you that was so beautiful to read.

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Very nice. It made me cry.
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This was a very touching poem, Jaime. I really did enjoy it. It's too bad that more people don't share your sentiments.

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Thanks, Jaime, I really needed that.
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That's beautiful Jaime. Thanks.
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