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Old 10-31-2007, 06:38 AM #1
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Default window ...

WINDOW -BMW '07
I could smell through a window,
The salted foaming sea,
Cocoa butter, cotton candy.
Through a window I smell,
Diesel fuel, hot tar,
Some funky dope from that car!
Through a window comes,
B-B-Q cooking out,
Our Garbage truck doing its route.
Newly fallen fresh rain,
Dog crap from that Great Dane.
Through a window
Sulfur like rotten eggs,
Used smoke from those cigs.
Pizza delivery , Jasmine in bloom,
Cow manure earths perfume
Forest pine with citrus sweet
And “Is that your smelly feet !?!”
Open window more PLEASE
I need some of that fresh breeze!
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WHO’S LOOKING -BMW'07
Through a window brown eyes blue,
To the soul inside of you,
Looking looking I can see,
All the things you wish to be.

Through a window into deep,
Secrets you’ve chosen to keep.
And tears from times you cried,
When she left or because he lied.

Through a window it’s right there
In a mirror that’s trapped your stare.
And nothing can fully disguise
The ALL of EVERYTHING in those eyes
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