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Old 02-01-2008, 12:18 PM #1
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okay here is the Love poem I sorta kinda told Frank I would post. but gee do I really have to admit I wrote a love poem yulk !!!!

My Love
Exact fitting that small shiny thing,
It’s all the courage I need to bring.
It speaks all the words that go un-said,
Loud as the ones spoken the day we wed.
A perfect circle no end no start,
Like real love that’s true from the heart.
Through every kind of good, Bad,
Through rich, poor, happy, sad,
A promise of unending compromises and care.
Nurturing growing the love we share,
Day after day year after year.
Around my finger I wear,
A symbol of perpetual Love you see,
A love that has kept us together as “we”!
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Old 02-01-2008, 02:30 PM #2
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that was awesome i enjoyed that
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Well, Burntmarshmellow, I hope you shared that with your love!

That was sweet.
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That was so precious!

It's always good to share "the love".

Thank you for sharing.

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thanks for all the kind words.. really . I am just not a writer of love poems
yulk I cant believe I wrote this . Its from a few years back and
I dont think I have written one since .just shows that there is love in all of us eh?glad it is enjoyed ...feb 14 soon to arrive... now to avoid anymore connection to this goofy mushy poem
many blessings to everyone
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I am just not a writer of love poems
I beg to differ. You may not write them often, but you certainly write them well as a writer.

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