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Old 02-16-2008, 03:24 PM #31
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VACATION
I want a vacation where no men are!
where the sun is soothing warm,
and magically the food appears.
a vacation where laughter plays like music,
sweet scented smells linger long,
and my favorite pal is next to me smiling.
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A Soundproof scream closet... ha sounds worth while at least in my house.
well then that shall make a good tag I think
next TAG IS THE CLOSET
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Old 02-19-2008, 10:02 PM #32
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Nobody else wants to continue this one? I've been waiting! lol
Oh well, looks like I will have to give it a go...


Skeletons in your closet,
You always try to hide,
A past in darkness,
And so much mystery inside.
Skeletons in your closet,
You don’t want anyone to see,
Secrets you have to keep,
That you will never set free.

~Jaime~

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Sorry I Am Out Of Order. Just Getting Back From Computer Being Down.

Good Morning

I`m Just Dropping In
To Say,
'i Hope You Have A
Wonderful Day!


May Your Morning Be
Sunny Side Up,
Your Afternoon Bright Too.
May The Whole Day
Bring Good News To You!

Tag::::: Spring Time
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Okay I am cheating ,I wrote this in 06

SPRING SEASON SONNET-BMW
Embrace me, as the rush begins to flow,
over taking winter’s lonely emptiness.
Calling the rested flowers from their beds…
throats of masses singing passions.
Bosom heavy magnificent replenish.
Heated breath beckons with her every summons.
Silky satin, rainbows, her bows, on the ground,
She’s a master of ballets, a mover, a shaker!
Divine resplendent visions , painting earthly canvas.
Spring is building up , to burst , to over flow,
splashing majestic brilliance to behold.
Mother nature screams to every entity…
“Hold me with welcoming open arms, now
Embrace me as the rush begins to flow!”
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good job you two, ha Jaimie I thought I would have to come and do the closet myself just to change the tag ...sorry I chose a cheesy tag on that one . well we have a lunar eclipse, the shuttle landing and a satellite being shot down today/tonight
next tag is THE SKIES ABOVE or THE SKY
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Blush Stars


Stars do not struggle to shine,

rivers do not struggle to flow,

and you will never struggle

to excel in life,

because you deserve the best.

Hold on to your dream and

it shall be well with you!



i don`t think this is what you want. But it the best i can do at this monment.

next Tag is FRIENS::::: HOPE THAT OK!!!!!!!
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Talking Friend Friendship

GIVING YOU TWO PEOMS TODAY. I NOW IT IS OUT OF ORDER BUT I WANTED TO LET YOU SEE THEM.

FRIEND

Friend are always there to lean on ,to lend a helping

hand, and just to talk to when times get rough.

Sometimes I wonder why they stick around. We

unload all our problems and worries on them

and they listen faithfully without expecting

anything in return for their time. They

are remarkable people.


FRIENDSHIP


Friendship is loving and caring.

When your friend is down you feel down to.

When your friend is happy you try to

be happy with them.

When your friend is hurt you feel hurt

too.

When your friend is sick you feel sick

too.

When your friend needs a friend you`re

there for them,

That`s what i call FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!!!











I HOPE THIS IS OK. I JUST LIKE THESE 2 POEMS FOR SOME REASON AND WANTED TO SHARE THEM WITH YOU ALL.
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this is my favorite verse about friendship Darlene posted it...here is the link

http://neurotalk.psychcentral.com/thread35259.html
I enjoyed your very much also nana
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keep getting booted off with this wireless connection. will try heart later..
sorry nana1 i see ya here.
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here's my friend poem

"FRIENDS"
Friends are interesting creatures
Who come with all sort of features
There are some who are comical
And fill us with much humor
And there are those
We only see in the summer
Some are so kind
And some considerate
Some keep us on hold
For oh too many minutes
There are compassionate ones
And others who make us wonder
There are those who help us understand
All our foolish blunders
There are some who make us irate
And yes some we use words like hate
For it's those friends that we lose
That remind us of all the times shared
So my friends please have a care
A friend may be counting on you




heart"


friendships becoming more intense
I didnt want to fall again am I so dense

twisting in agony inside my mind
she is someone I had hoped to find

so what do i do and how do I say
all i thought of was you all day

falling again ws not in my dreams
im falling again im going to scream

having no choice from the very start
I guess I will just have to follow my heart



ok who is next
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TRUST-BMW
I must state trust is hard,
It has left me bruised and marred.
I lost my trust in humanity
When I was swimming in insanity,
Looking for truth heres a fact,
Was never getting any answers back.
Alone with everyone all around,
REAL trust was hard to be found.
I finally discovered you see,
The only one I can trust is ME.
And with that fact I have found,
True friends that now souround,
My life and comfort me.
I again have trust in humanity.
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next tag.... Look out your window and write a poem about what you see..
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