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Old 09-02-2010, 01:35 PM #511
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Bongo -BMW-
Oh Yes, I know Bongo
got one some time ago
Was for my girl Halei
when she turned
the age of three
then she grew
went to school
played 2ed drum base
she looked so cool
switched to snare
made the drum corp
x-country at 16 hard to bear.
Oh Yes, I know Bongo
got one some time ago
it is a favorite thing
when young ones come visiting.

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OK, I thought I would revive this thread, while I feel inspired!


On The Jetty

Sitting on the jetty,
Looking out to sea,
I’m always wishing,
You were here with me.

The waves are lapping,
Just below my feet,
This is where we,
Always used to meet.

Memories of you,
Still pull at my heart,
Here on this jetty,
Is where we had to part…



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WOOD

I have been waiting all year,
for the right weather to appear.
A chance at last, patience withstood
now is the night I can burn my wood .
The stars sparkling crisp in October's air
by the fire and the wood pile I sit in my chair
Gazing up at meteor showers while it crackles n smokes
coaxing the fire with wood and my jab and pokes.
All night long a majestic skyward show
in the morning the embers were still aglow .
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The beauty of autumn blankets the grass,
and beckons me to get off my ***
I raked for days, still smell of smoke
But last nights wind
this must be a joke!!

The beauty of autumn blankets the grass.

New word is Patient.
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Patient - BMW 11-11
Be patient and the time will come,
have a deep breath or two , just hold on.
Take a step back and dont lose your cool
act patient least ye be the fool .
Losing temper off the handle there it goes
cross the line that frustration shows .
Wisely diverting any more of a anger fit,
you just need to be still and silent .
Be patient because that time will pass
you'll be looking back as they kiss your ***
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MOON-BMW -
A sliver in darkness dimly glowing
hovering permanence , it is all knowing .
Warped in a zillion wishes and dreams
catching my prayers , my silent screams .
The unspoken words , the ones I miss .
Yes ,Oh so small I am in this great abyss.
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Free topic = anything goes? lol

Anything goes

Anything goes,
Don’t you know?
Open up,
And let you wild side show!
Anything goes
That’s what they say,
Just step up,
And do it your own way!
Anything goes,
Yes, it’s true,
Own up now,
It’s what you want to do!




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Not my best work, just something quick! lol I've had writers block for a while now, but the painting compensates for that, surely?
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As the days go by
Life passes by
Some days are opening the sky

Reflecting on youth
Wild days they seem
What a dream

Have I turned mild
Passion revives

As the day time sky
Shines


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Life

Unpredictable changing energy
Energizing draining daring challenging
Fresh with possibilities of your choice

Golden hues in the morning sun
Laughter from soul to soul
Hands to heart saying goodbyes


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