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Old 02-24-2008, 09:48 AM #51
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Birth

The hours in labor too many to count
the pain that's endured is quite evened out

You came to our world
on a cold winters' day
Holding you close
made the gray go away

Another came to the world
on a rainy fall day
Tiny and crinkled
seemed like a holiday

The third times the charm
a warm winter day
here you are now
almost walking away....


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I think I've had creative block the last few days! lol

Lazy days pass,
Lying in the grass,
When there’s no one else around,
Relaxing here,
My mind is clear,
A peacefulness can be found…

New tag...ummm...Nightmares
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nightmares and dreams
scarry enough to scream
your future is bleak
your attitude is weak
how can this illness be
I was so loving and free
now i dread what is next
soon i start to say oh heck
screw the illness I am strong
this part of the dream doesnt belong
I shall overcome this horrid dread
realizing the nightmare was only in my hedad



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GRADE SCHOOL
Reading writing and arithmetic,
Staying home when I played sick
My twin brother was the one who,
Was the creep, who ate the glue,
Even the chalk coated his tongue.
Together the trouble we found was fun.
We had our own twin talk too
The school didn’t know what to do
Until the third year you see
They decided to separate him and me
So never ever again were we
In the same classes him and me.

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the soft dirt beneath my toes
barefoot on a country road
stepping lightly as i wander a path
wandering so far its time i sat
the fine dust of the worn trail
I drag my toes through it like a snail
slow and steady i write my name
the dirts so soft writings a game
so i leave my mark and look below
footprints in the dirt along the road


yikes lol


ok some one else enjoy dirt as a subject


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Mud Pies
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do we have dirty minds today?? ha ha
Mud Pies-BMW-
She Has Made Mud Pies,
After The Sky Cries.
Ate A Spaghetti Dish,
Out Of Worms For The Fish.
Stored Holly Berries In Her Nose.
Changed Color By Painting Her Cloths.
That Is When She Was Two Or Three.
I Remember Those Times Clearly.
Now She Is Almost Seventeen.
The Only Thing That’s Still Seen,
Is How She loves TO Make Mud Pies,
Shortly After The Sky Cries.
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the brilliance of the blaze
as you sit and gaze
into the crackling night
it dances, what a sight
leaping flames fill u with desire
mesmerized,entranced by the camp fire

burnt hot dogs on a stick
a pop and sparkle best be quick
crackers and chocolate by the score
come on everyone its time for smors
feeling good feeling inspired
mesmerized enchanted by the camp fire

now its time for some scary stories
spooky eerie and sometimes gory
unbelievable darkness the night u can see so far
laying there counting and dreaming of all the stars
u think of the scary story hoping they were liars
mesmerized enchanted by the camp fire


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Leap Year? Hmmm...

A leap year,
February twenty-nine,
Two months gone,
And all is looking fine.
A leap year,
Comes but one in four,
Waiting three,
Then there’s one more!
A leap year,
What can you say?
You’ll have to wait
A long time for your birthday!



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THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH CITY! BUT I HOPE YOU MAY LIKE IT, I DID IT LAST SUMMER SO I AM CHEATING!!!!!!


As I was walking

down life`s highway

many years ago

I came upon a

sign that read

HEAVENS GROCERY STORE

When I got a little closer

the door swung open wide

and when i came to myself

I was standing inside.

I saw a host of angles.

They were standing everywhere,

One handed me a basket and said

" My child shop with care"

Everything a human needed

was in the grocery store.

And what you could not carry

you could come back for more.

Fist I got some Patience,

Love was in the same row

Further down Understanding,

you need that everywhere you go.

I got a box or two of wisdom,

and faith a bag or two

and Charity of course

I wouldn`t miss the holy ghost,

it was all over the place.

Strength and courgage had to get,

my basket almost full.

But i remebered i needed Grace,

And then i chose salavation

for that was free.

then i started to the counter to pay my bill.

As i went up the aisle i saw prayer and put that in

for i knew when i stepped outside

I would run into sin

peace and joy were alot.

Then i said to the angel

" NOW HOW MUCH DO I OWE YOU"

HE SMILED AND SAID TAKE THEM

"MY CHILD GOD PAID YOUR BILL

A LONG LONG TIME AGO"



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whatever is not a good reply
sends my nerve to the sky
strangers and kids too
gonna lock em all in a zoo
a person ask's for a reason
not to be treated as a special season
so when i ask a question make sure you never
look at me like deer in headlights and say whatever


jamie i liked that poem on leap year was not an easy subject



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sorry runnin out of ideas and am watching science channel
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