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Old 03-02-2008, 02:34 PM #61
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Cosmic Rays huh? hummmm... probly not what you had or have in mind but it is what came to my mind....

SIMPLICITY
Some of me , to ALL of you .

A sail of words billow threw,

I dash above to conceive.

Float then soar, mastering drift.

Surrender me… coaxing lift.

Those grounded may not perceive.

Angles waiting eagerly.

Light wings unveiled willingly.

Give open slow to receive.

Rhythmic riffs dispensary.

Stimulate high sensory,

Energies rise to achieve.

When spirits reach , touching light.

Flocks of angels take to flight.

Giving visions I retrieve.
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P.S.yes Jaime has lots of great word she is sharing that is a fact.
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Old 03-05-2008, 10:36 PM #62
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motocross race
dirt in my face
hitting 4th gear
the crowds a blur
adreline is high
cant see the sky
the faster I go
to end up first in show
the bike is so fast
could not end up in last
so its the last turn
i put on the burn
hitting that last jump
landing with a bump
i woul;d be so loss
without racing motocross



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FAST CARS -BMW-
Melting rubber on the tar,
Going fast in his car.
Passing close on a curve,
Maneuver quick, violent swerve.
Street racing with his friend,
Suddenly crashing end over end.
Ugly wreckage strewn around,
Car and body peppered the ground.
Safety belt was never used,
A simple fact that’s so abused!
Street racing fun? Maybe so...
wish he had buckled up before the “go”.
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Winning

Winning isn’t everything,
It’s how you play the game,
That’s what they tell you,
But it doesn’t feel the same.
Winning isn’t everything,
But it really is the best,
A fantastic feeling,
Being better than the rest.
Winning isn’t everything,
But it can go to your head,
You feel invincible,
You believe what’s being said.
Winning isn’t everything,
But you know it’s not true,
It’s what you strive for,
And it means everything to you!

~Jaime~

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trustuing with all your soul
will u be let down you never know
you take the faithful leap
on a path way too steep
giving your all to that someone
hoping they realize its not for fun
you count and rely on this trust
it goes both ways or you end up in the dust


sorry not up to my liking but i am fighting pnuemonia

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Smiling is infectious,

you catch it like the flu.

When someone smiled at me today,

i started smiling too.

I passed artound the corner,

and someone saw my grin-

When he smiled I realized,

I`d passed it on to him.


I thought about that smile,

then i realized its worth,

A single smile just like min,

could travel round the earth.


So, if you feel a smile begin,

don`t leave it undetected.


Lets start an epidemic quick

and get the world infected.











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A smile can be contagious
Beeming
Shining
Warming

A smile can come from Laughter
Bouncing
Infectious
Inviting

A smile is all I need to get through the day

{Sorry I've been MIA for a while...battling a bout with ON}


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OK now, you asked for it. A 5 minute poem on "Trails" :




Across the sky
It leaves it's mark
Wispy, floating,
White and Stark
Against the Cobalt Blue
Winter sky they cross
Criss and drift
And ripple like
The Jet Stream
Waving at her
Sister in the
Waves..............



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Crazy Candles


This is not to do with fence. but here this goes.

Find a place in house that is quiet. Get a chair and place

it in the middle of room. Now; put a white candle to the left, front

right, and back of chair, Light them then sit in chair You`re surround

by lights that protect you.

In your mind, take yourself to a seashore, and put your

back against a palm tree. Place your feet in the warm sand. Feel

the sun on your face, the breeze in your hair. Look up at the

clouds and take 3 deep-breaths, Feeling all the negativity and

hurt flowing out, into the waves against your feet.

It is so nice to get away to a place to be able just to relax,

just let the stress down from the days and months.






I have no idea if this makes any sense to any one, let me now if it makes sense to you. I am in this weird mood tonight...


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WAY AWESOME WIIX
sorry I dont feel like doing a tag right now I just feel like being lost in the writings and the arts of others.
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