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Old 03-10-2008, 10:16 PM #71
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I do believe "Fences" are still up for the grabbing. Come on, SOMEONE!! I want to do another poem!! This is SO fun!!!
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Old 03-10-2008, 10:37 PM #72
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Okay, Wiix, this is just so you can keep your creative juices flowing. (Mine are dried up.)

Fences (rhymes with senses)

"Desperado"

Desperado, why don't you come to your senses?
You been out ridin' fences for so long now
Oh, you're a hard one
I know that you got your reasons
These things that are pleasin' you
Can hurt you somehow

Don't you draw the queen of diamonds, boy
She'll beat you if she's able
You know the queen of hearts is always your best bet

Now it seems to me, some fine things
Have been laid upon your table
But you only want the ones that you can't get

Desperado, oh, you ain't gettin' no younger
Your pain and your hunger, they're drivin' you home
And freedom, oh freedom well, that's just some people talkin'
Your prison is walking through this world all alone

Don't your feet get cold in the winter time?
The sky won't snow and the sun won't shine
It's hard to tell the night time from the day
You're losin' all your highs and lows
Ain't it funny how the feeling goes away?

Desperado, why don't you come to your senses?
Come down from your fences, open the gate
It may be rainin', but there's a rainbow above you
You better let somebody love you, before it's too late

Okay, I guess "fences" is still up for grabs, so you can either use that or "belly button lint."

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Old 03-10-2008, 11:06 PM #73
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Oh God, your going to Kill me, Girl!!! And that was a song. You didn't make that up in 5 minutes like you are supposed to.

Belly Button Lint???? AWWW crap. OK, I'll give it a shot. BUT if I come up with nothing in 5 I will come back and tell you that Your belly Button Lint is Still up for grabbing.
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OK, I did SOMETHING:

Eww, what's dat??
Hangin out the hole
in me belly
Looks to be sort of Linty
Best I git me
A Q-Tip and
Do me the
Swirly
in dere
for a bit
a da linty.





TAG: Sneakers
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Hey, that was dern good for 5 min.! Cute pic, too! Zat you, Wiix?
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Hey, that was dern good for 5 min.! Cute pic, too! Zat you, Wiix?
Well?? Where ya be?? I be waitin on ya.
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FENCES
I used to like them
They made the best neighbors
Blocked sound, held my privacy
But Then I had a barbed wire fence
Inside my mouth, IT wore me 16 WEEKS
The first time , 24 weeks a second time.
I dislike any fences now,
Chain links and iron gates
Board on board, White picket
They all make me remember it.
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okay I probly should not have done tag today but the tag needs to change from fences as fast as it can any way , anyhow . Really I do appologize pain flare up the last few days and fences just hurt me just thinking about them.
soooo something soft and lovely like.... FLOWER PETALS yes TAG IS FLOWER PETALS aaahh velety smooth soft ahhhhh
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tag you wiix and topic flower petals. usualy we have just been giving a topic like I just did tag topic is flower petals and anyone can do it but if ya want me to tag a certain person
you are it Wiix. flower petals
Peace BMW
ohhh I think I got ya Wiix...was the tag sneakers and not fences??????????? me bad bad burntmarshmallow. sorry Time out for BMW! I will do sneakers in a few mins . okay here ya go .
SNEAKERS-BMW
I love barefoot time
Toes upon the ground
After the rain has fallen
Or fresh grass mowed down
Squeaky sands of the beach
Underneath my heals
Nothing is any more comfy
Then how barefoot stepping feels.
Keep your sandals, fancy heels
and your socks and shoes
Sneakers can stay by the door
They give my feets the blues
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Tag is flower petals

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