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Old 02-01-2008, 04:32 AM #1
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"Falling Snow"

Falllng snow from up high
Gentle Earth's Lullaby

Frozen Teardrops from above
I wonder if this is Nature's Love

White and fluffy all around
What can we make on the ground?

Falling snow this winter day
I hope it never goes away



New Tag.....BM....Sunrise
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"The Rumba" - BMW
Moon sets
lay west drowsy
full weight heavy it beds
Into the farthest darkest nook from
Sunrise
Crawls inch by inch smooth and steady
Mounting earths horizon
ecstasy spills
colors
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Frank is Tagged your topic is... "natures music"
Gladys good job and it rhymes . glad yesterday was a good time for you
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BMW p.s. if anyone would like to join in hop onto this post and we will tag you. it is more fun then you may think.
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bump bump ... "natures music"
put "MY" Love poem up as promised Frank . Please do not tag me with a love poem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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natures music

breezes gently caress the fields
offering a gentle whistle is what it yields

a soft rush of harmonized sounds
as gentle winds caress the grounds

rustling, creeking as the branches sway
the sound of natures music can blow you away.


i liked both of your poems ok I tag BM

subject: waterfalls
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"Waterfalls" BMW '08
When this sun
cooks my bun
Time calls
for waterfalls
to sooth my skin
thirst quenching
relaxing way
to spend a day
by waterfalls
not caged by walls
just listening
to the water sing
undressed
refreshed
when this sun
cooks my bun
time calls
for waterfalls.
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sorry cant be to serious on a Friday afternoon. Florida get hot hot and wish a waterfall in my backyard most days. ha ha. we have sink holes and hurricanes.
tagging Gladys with... "moonbeams" or just moon if you prefer.
This is very fun Frank for sharing game. not like poetry slam but as fun.
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MoonBeams in the Night
Creatures beckon with a howl
Life looks different
Almost eerie
Like a Reflection in the Mirror

MoonBeams reflect on me
Skin glistens
Shadows dart back and forth
Almost mystical
Cat cuddles my Ankle and Purrs

~GladysD 08~

This is fun :-) Thanks Frank BMW, what's poetry slam?

And I'll tag Frank....although I'm tempted to tag Curious in or anyone else that would like to give it a shot :-)

TAG: The Trees
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A poetry slam is open to the public people gather and have a slam you sign up to compete. everyone is given a topic and you have 5 minutes to write a poem on that topic. then each person stand at the mic and reads performing the
poem they wrote to the judges and audience. audience cheers for their fav.
there is usualy 3 rounds ... 3 topics . at the end the judges and audience picks the best 3 or 4 people. I just did my second slam this December... was a BLAST!!!!
I LOVE THE LINE YOU HAVE "CAT CUDDLES MY ANKLE PURRS! "
beautiful image and sound pop right into mind ...real poetic, great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Trees????



Forest
calming peaceful
walking along with me
uplifting my soul touches light
Gods trees
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another cinquain poem 2,4,6,8,2,
okay I went out of turn but I have to take time out from tag for weekend
busy with teen kids science fair, 2 softball games ,card night , then of course super bowl thing. so I call time out.. this would be fun to do in chat room here
some night or day. ya'all have a goodie weekend.
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TAG FRANK.... SEA SHELLS.

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sorry been feeling ill the last few days

laughing children run to and fro,
what they are doing no one knows,
playing, skipping and digging in the sand,
running to me showing me their hands,
filled with precious gifts they not know
to them they are diamonds, gems and golden bells,
yet to me they are just sea shells....

sorry took me so long not doing well here

I tag anyone who wants to join in
subject;;; school days;;;
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School days-- BMW--
Yellow bus, crayons, finger paint,
Nap time and recess by the gate.

Spelling words lunch line,
Passing grade makes you shine.

Term papers, hall pass,
Never caught skipping class.

Passing notes, endless laughter
Kissing boys all the girls chased after.

Track team state champs one year
Thanks to this hurdle jumper here.

Graduation pranks well played,
My school days will never fade.
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Hope your doing better now wee..Frank.
It is TOO BEAUTIFUL to be inside the weather in florida is perfect. Cheri will second that. I will tag both wee and Gladys and any by stander. yup I know there is a few following along here ... a poem dose not have to rhyme and it can be as short as 3 lines..... so come on lurkers and tag mates...
topic is COLORS
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