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Old 02-02-2008, 10:51 PM #1
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Heart Thinking Of You

Thinking of you,
In times like these,
And your battle,
With this disease.

Thinking of you,
Suffering in pain,
Every day,
It’s so insane.

Thinking of you,
More than you know,
Because I care,
When you’re so low.

Thinking of you,
When times are tough,
You’re going through,
More than enough.

Thinking of you,
More than old friends,
And this battle,
That never ends…

{©2008 Jan B.}
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Old 02-02-2008, 11:03 PM #2
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Jamie this is a great . I don't have much to say except that your words are ...
"Write on". all your poem are always awesome .
I think we all have friends we are thinking of and too we ourself s have ones thinking of us .. most of the time we don't realize that. will be enjoying this for a long while.
Thanks for sharing.
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Old 02-06-2008, 08:46 AM #3
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ha Just wanted to tell you Jaime , I am to visit my dentist today and Your poem here gives me comfort even though it is not writen about or to anyone specific it is a poem that hugs the whole world I just wanted to bump this to top so I can find it when I get back later.
a steam ship cargo load of blessings Jamie.
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I noticed that I misspelled your name so sorry... dentist has my brain on half power the last couple days. sorry about the misspelling

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Hey,
That is fantastic, I love all of your poems but this one is my best!!
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