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THE CHAIR-BMW
Drilling vibration, Engulf my sensation, Novocain shots at the nerve. Tight tugging jerks, Invading pain lurks, Smiling teeth to preserve. Torturing affair in that chair! --------------------------------------------- BACK BONE-BMW Pulling yourself up, Every time you fall. Recovering yourself, Standing tall, Inside. Stubborn in spite of difficulties, To continue on,Believing. At last achieving, Nervy calm boldness. Cradling courage, Enduring constant change. |
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I like those poems, BMW, and I thought I would add one I just come up with!
Pain Never ending pain, Engulfs me again. Understanding it all, Remains a tough call. Although it’s hard to take, Letting it win is a mistake. Giving in is just not right, I have the strength to fight, And I know relief is in sight... ![]() ~Jaime~
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Great word
![]() Jaime ![]() ![]() Many Blessings Jaime. Peace and Love BMW |
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Please Listen -BMW
Suffocating, struggling, sleep deprived Noisy beyond my limits, not listening to my pleas. Out of his bed I sleep now, angry! Relaxed throat chokes stopping breath over and over. I check thought the night for signs of life, I love. Not using c-pap machine, will I find you dead? Gasping grouchy grumpy guy -------------------------------------- Electric nightmare -BMW Powerful, profound Hidden from view Anesthesia dolorosa Neuro stimulator Trigeminal neuralgia, to cope, accept, deal Out of options for now My face, mouth ,my teeth ,my lip Present always, part of me A horrible monster to tame Inside, in charge, IS REAL Not understood, nerve snapped, not giving in |
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I wrote a few more during the week...you inspired me!
![]() Pain Caught in a trap, How do you escape? Raw emotions, On a rollercoaster, Never ending pain, Indescribable, Completely overtakes, Pain is a part of your life, And it doesn’t seem fair, Incomparable, Not how life should be… Doctors Do we trust them? Often we don’t, Consultations too short, Tests and scans to be done, Overpriced medications, Results we expect, Sometimes we don’t get answers… Nightmares Not what they seem, Indescribable, Giving you chills, Hard to understand, Terrifying too, Mind controlling thoughts, And disturbing visions, Restless every night, Endless dreams, Something doesn’t feel right… {©2008 Jan B.} ![]()
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Burntmarshmallow (02-23-2008) |
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WOW, these are really good.
Thanks for sharing them with us. Love Alison
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Burntmarshmallow (02-23-2008) |
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Ali you probably have done one of these in your school. I have 2 girls 17 and 13
they have done this type of poetry before at school. I bet you could do a couple great ones. try it it is fun. (as well as a good way to express hard stuff). do one about your "sorta new" puppy. ![]() nice to chat with you. Peace and Love BMW |
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I thought would revive this thread as I have written a couple of acrostic poems for a fibro friend.
![]() FIBROMYALGIA Fatigue Insomnia Brain fog Restlessness Over tired Muscle pain You’ve had enough! Aching body Legs so stiff Gripping pain Irritable Anxiety and depression… FIBROMYALGIA Fun cannot be had I feel I’m going mad Brain fog has got hold of me Really wanting to break free Over this fatigue every day Muscle pain won’t go away Yearning for my pain-free past Aching that takes over fast Legs just don’t want to work Give me meds to stop the jerk I can’t take it any more Afraid of what lies in store… ![]() ~Jaime~
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Burntmarshmallow (03-31-2009) |
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Grand Magnate
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Thoughtful
Helping Appreciated Noticed Knack Sharing ![]() You rock, Thinking of you Jaime ![]() Low pain and positive thoughts to you. PEACE BMW |
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Jaime_S (03-31-2009) |
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A GREAT FRIEND
Always there no matter what. Giving you support and guidance. Reaching out and giving you that extra hand. Excellent in every way. A true pal who will stick with you forever. Trying to help you fulfill your dreams. Finding the path for you. Right in every way. Inside your heart forever. Ending all the fights. Never cheats nor lies. Doing everything they can for YOU.
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