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03-11-2008, 04:19 PM | #1 | ||
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High above the blue waves float white, fluffy clouds
As a warm, gentle breeze blows soft over my skin. I stand on the deck and a soft voice calls my name, With a siren’s sweet sound, the sapphire sea sings. “Let my waves gently hold you and soothe all your cares, No worries, nor sadness, nor sorrow will cling. As you quietly sink into my loving embrace Let fear find no home, I’ll take care of all things.” The voice, so compelling, continues to call But something stops me and says, “Hold onto the ring. There’s much more waiting up there above the blue sea Than the song of the siren will promise to bring." February 2008
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03-11-2008, 07:07 PM | #2 | |||
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thankyou so much I needed this poem today!!!! and I love the title "Blue Poetry " as I am feeling really really blue myself lately . Sharing this is much appreciated. Peace BMW |
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Ms Deb (03-14-2008) |
03-23-2008, 12:20 AM | #3 | ||
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Thank you for sharing this Ms Deb!! I very much like your poem,
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Ms Deb (03-31-2008) |
03-28-2008, 05:53 PM | #4 | ||
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Thank you for your poem, it really means something to me!
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"Thanks for this!" says: | Ms Deb (03-31-2008) |
04-18-2008, 10:32 PM | #5 | ||
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This is absolutely lovely! It is 'blue' but it is soothing. I love the ending that waits for more than the song of the siren.
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