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Old 05-17-2008, 09:42 AM #1
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Default Beautiful Day

Lasgo, here's MY beautiful day (!!!) here goes!

I woke in the morning
to see up the sun
I thought to myself "Wow!
- this is going to be fun!"

This is not going well,
but I'll have a good try;
it started to rain,
I began to cry!

The rain it then stopped,
the clouds came apart:
I looked to the sky
and I saw the start

Of a beautiful rainbow,
all shades of hue,
I got all poetic, and I then thought of YOU!
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