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Old 12-05-2008, 01:31 PM #1
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am not a Christian

nor a religious man...

believe in something, I do

spiritual whenever I can...

but I do read the scripture

also the koran

'ave read buddha and LaoTze

often more confused...

yep...

I am...

read about the angels

Michael and Gabriel

know that they often

walk amongst men(and women)...

shining love from above

healing hearts needing amend...

But here I am today,

year 2008

the world uncertain

chaotic and grave

I look up above

fists shaking with angry command...

where are they now?

hello?! Mike and Gabby!

my heart has sank

I lower my head and give up

but then...

by some sort of miracle...

reached out a hand...

upon my shoulder,

voices of comfort

appeared with content...

"we've always been here,

never far away...

you just are lost

in the imbroglio of

detriment..."

"look and listen,

carefully around you

with intent...

the "sign" of us

will appear before you

when you take away all you

resent..."

one of the places

of the "sign" that I'd feel

is coming here to NT,

to read from all

with great deal

their wisdom and strength

and the love

that are real

remind me

that I walk amongst angels

need only

keep my heart peeled...

(this is a sucky poem, but I felt the need to express how I feel about the angels that I walk amongst...

thank you all....)

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.....beautiful (((whomoi)))...you are one of the angels here at nt...
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hello... 'angel' friend ... I, too, believe in angels!!
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No thank you, cause u are an angel yourself!
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I agree, you, Moi, are an angel too!
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am not a Christian

nor a religious man...

believe in something, I do

spiritual whenever I can...

but I do read the scripture

also the koran

'ave read buddha and LaoTze

often more confused...

yep...

I am...

read about the angels

Michael and Gabriel

know that they often

walk amongst men(and women)...

shining love from above

healing hearts needing amend...

But here I am today,

year 2008

the world uncertain

chaotic and grave

I look up above

fists shaking with angry command...

where are they now?

hello?! Mike and Gabby!

my heart has sank

I lower my head and give up

but then...

by some sort of miracle...

reached out a hand...

upon my shoulder,

voices of comfort

appeared with content...

"we've always been here,

never far away...

you just are lost

in the imbroglio of

detriment..."

"look and listen,

carefully around you

with intent...

the "sign" of us

will appear before you

when you take away all you

resent..."

one of the places

of the "sign" that I'd feel

is coming here to NT,

to read from all

with great deal

their wisdom and strength

and the love

that are real

remind me

that I walk amongst angels

need only

keep my heart peeled...

(this is a sucky poem, but I felt the need to express how I feel about the angels that I walk amongst...

thank you all....)

thanks moi

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behold the one

in everything

for it is the second

that leads us astray
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....beautiful Vini..... ...and so true...
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*blush...

I sincerely believe YOU guys are the angels...

this was horrible poetry...I tried to edited about 10 times and I still couldn't get it, but oh well...it IS from the heart...

((((BIG HUGS)))) everyone...

and vini, I really liked that! Thanks!

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Hi 'moi' ! There is a song I Believe in Angels but I forgot the name of the singer... I do believe that they come and comfort us when the world seems to be falling apart. There is too much confusion, too much arrogance, too many problems but, in the midst of all this, there is peace and love and wonderful people who share their thoughts and prayers. And when we are confused and lost, there seems to come into our hearts the heart-beat of hope.
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I love your poetry. It is well done. The theme of it is wonderful. Your an angel also.

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