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Old 11-18-2006, 12:25 PM #1
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Default The emotional river

tears as many as the stars in universe
never ending river of salty water pouring down
say words carrying emotions- see my wet eyes
no lock gate, strong enough to hold back this force
sensations playing a vivid game- in the chambers of my heart
sadness rolling in like the mighty tide
covering my cheeks- leaving my chin- falling down on dust
my chest huge in breathing pain- eating up my air
numb features of a soul astray
cry a little while longer
then- let it pass my way
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