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Old 02-23-2009, 02:48 PM #1
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Teeth save her

So alone,
afraid to see.
She was the one,
who coudn't believe.

She cried each night,
prayed each moment.
Living her life,
in the scars of time.

Noone understood,
her love in heart.
All they ever did,
was make her fall apart.

Someone please show her,
shes worth it all.
Don't let her fall,
in the clouds up high.
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She cried each night,
prayed each moment.
Living her life,
in the scars of time.

But a morning followed
Each scary night
With a chance to live life
One more glorious time

So she grabbed up each moment
and held them close
then flung them so far
Into the clouds up so high

No longer alone
Nor afraid to see
That indeed she was worth it-
She truly believed!

Hope you don't mind that I wrote a sequel to your poem.
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She cried each night,
prayed each moment.
Living her life,
in the scars of time.

But a morning followed
Each scary night
With a chance to live life
One more glorious time

So she grabbed up each moment
and held them close
then flung them so far
Into the clouds up so high

No longer alone
Nor afraid to see
That indeed she was worth it-
She truly believed!

Hope you don't mind that I wrote a sequel to your poem.
bless you g mar sue
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Thank you grandma Sue and vini for your comments. love ya both.
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