Twilight ---Tina- '06

Rolling black

Pitch darkness

Blind isolation, hovering

Covering smothering

Stumbled down

Into the center

Spills reflection

Blue tone hues

Overtaking black

Final light on distant

Horizons, A focal point

To REACH within oneself

In your darkest hours.



GREAT wonder
The words I wrote was a shame to share,
With 98 reads of just peek and stare
No words at all of “ I can relate”
Or” that poem it wasn’t so great”,
No words of any kind given back,
After sharing mine ,makes the lights turn black.
what is the point of sharing i wonder
it was not great great great
i got no replies, no friends that could relate
just showed what i already known
i am the stinky chesse that stands alone
nothing to do but wash away
my poems with all the words i had to say

burnt..can i call you bmw? that is how i think of you when i see your name..that and eating a nummy s'mores.

you are very talented. i hope you share more with us.

I liked it. Thanks for posting. Hope to see more from you soon.

-Cgirl-

..I did I had like 10 poems and no one said anything but I had like 98 read count so I erased them all away ...a word of acknowlegment would of been a bit nice. at least curious had enough kindness to post a reply and a million blessings for that curious..
if it is good enough for all to read THEN IT IS GOOD ENOUGH TO HAVE A REPLY!!!!!!!!!!
Peace and Love
Burntmarshmallow....Tina

BMW
so sorry you were offended by the lack of replies, but I hope you will understand that doesnt mean a lack of appreciation

sometimes I dont comment when I read the poems and writings here, simply because to make some trite comment seems so out of place when there is such depth of emotion or insight etc in the writing...I feel sure that many felt that way.

I am the same when I go to an art gallery, or see a moving play or film....I dont really speak about it, I just absorb and reflect within

so please know that you posting your writing WAS appreciated by many of us, and again sorry that by not commenting, you felt that was unappreciative

I have the ability to restore your deleted posts and would so appreciate if you would let me do that

nah...I know how you feel, Tina. I have hardly had a reply either, but I am new to this forum. I'm usually at the Prkinson's forum.

From what I have read of your work, I see a unique structure to it that definitely makes it your own. Not only do you pay attention to your word choice for its meaning, but much consideration is given to each word as to how it looks in its position on the page. I bet that aspect of your poetry is the most frustrating at times. Keep writing, Tina. Feedback will come in due time.

michael b.

awww bmw....sweety, i wish you would put them back. ( or let me or chemar)

with all the views you know they were read. not everyone replies or know if they should reply on the creative posts. i think they don't want your posts to get lost on page 2 or 3.

just think about it hon. you are so very gifted and talented.

finally this forum is really starting to get used. and it sure is getting lots of views. i know your work touched so many.

Tina

just another and an apology from all of us who didnt realise that our not commenting would have a negative impact on you wanting to share your work here.

I do hope you will reconsider as I have learned here in our cyberworld that so often what we post may be being read by so many people, including guests here who arent yet registered to post. We never know that one person on whose life our words are going to have a profound impact, whether it is sharing our heart through our creativity, or imparting support or valuable information on the health boards.

soooooooooo
pretty please forgive us and dont stop sharing your talent with us.

we luv ya BMW and your gift with words is very deep and insightful. I really appreciated reading them

all forgiving no harm.
Peace and Love
Burntmarshmallow....Tina

I love your work! Please send me some. I would love to read more. Very well written. Very good. That's all I can say. I would love to have you send me some via private message. Maybe I'll send you some of mine that I can't post on here. Some that are a little too private.

-Cgirl-